Thursday, February 12, 2009

Road (Blog Assignment #3)


What happened here?
He has been fooled by someone

What's the story?
The man was walking down the road trying to get to the nearest city to rest. He was really tired and wanted to get a lift but there wasn't a single car nearby and he couldn't rest because it was too hot. He went on walking, when he saw a curtain of smoke forming behind him and he saw it was a car coming near him. He got really glad and started to move his hands to make the person in the car stop and give a lift to the next city. The car slowed down and a rough man looked at him. He asked the man if he wanted a lift and the man happily told him yes and got inside the car next to the rough man.
Some time later, he rough man started to look and the man's belonging and asked him what he had inside. The man told him he had some clothes and all the money he had. With that, the rough man turned and started to think how to get the man's belongings. He then stopped and said to the man that he remembered he had to go for some friends and with him they wouldn't have enough space for everyone. He asked the man if he could wait for him there, but he would take his belongings to a hotel so he wouldn't he to take care of it. The man, since he was so happy he gave him a lift, didn't think it through and said yes immidiately. He gets out and sits down next to the road. The rough man goes on and the man looks at his car until he can't see it anymore. Right now, he is still waiting for him to come, even tough it is really hot.

2 comments:

  1. Your story is very good and relistic to certain people, but I cannot think there are too much people that can be fooled so easily, even though I really liked yout story and how you made it.

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  2. You stole my picture¡¡¡¡¡XD, but I forgive you, I got inspired over a second, and made a great story, but I made a mistake while correcting and I dont know how to edit, but thats another story, I kinda feel bad for theman, but just kinda.

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